Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Writing With Something In Mind

           English is probably one of my least favorite subjects. Nothing against English professors or teachers, it's just that I don't enjoy sitting down and writing analytically on a novel. I love to read. That being said, I love reading when I don't have to be constantly keeping track of diction, symbols, syntax, themes, etc. When analysis comes into play; is when a book is no longer enjoyable to me. Novels were written as learning tools as well. Every story has some sort of message or messages to be learned from it. And in English 1101.01 one of our jobs for the research paper was to find a story and analyze the story and its meaning using other sources to back-up our claim. While writing this paper and doing other assignments in the class, I learned things that I will always keep in mind. I learned that when writing the reader should always be kept in mind no matter if the writing is creative or analytical.
Analytical and creative writing have their similarities and their differences. Most importantly, both forms of writing want the reader to stay engaged throughout the whole paper. In analytical papers it’s a lot harder to do that than in creative writing. In analytical papers you have to put all the facts out there for the readers. Leaving them guessing is the sign of a bad analysis paper. On the other hand, creative writing is all about making the reader guess and come to his/her own conclusions. That’s how you keep the reader engaged. My experience with creative writing was small but enjoyable. It’s not often that you get to use your imagination to make something come to life in words. Rhetoric is the last piece to the puzzle for both types of writing. It’s what keeps people reading. (If you are not engaged at this point I’m quite sorry I have not done a good job, but you’re over halfway done so why not keep reading right?)
Rhetoric is all about keeping the readers feelings in mind while writing. You want readers to be able to sympathize with you while reading. In the beginning of this blog I started off by saying, “English is probably one of my least favorite subjects,” right off the bat I am getting those who don’t like English or are more favored to a different subject to be more willing to hear what I have to say. Hopefully, some people are agreeing with what I’m saying by now or else I haven’t learned nearly as much in this class as I thought.
The rhetoric in the creative writing assignment was all about first person views. By narrating in first person, the reader felt more engaged as if it were the reader experiencing the story first hand. The sensory details, vivid scenery description, and thoughts all make the first person point of view come to life. It’s the words that mean the most for rhetoric. In the assignment choosing words that made the view feel first person was the most important part. For analytical papers, the rhetoric is all about having the reader relate to your argument. You want to make the argument feel as if your argument is the right one without forcing it down their throat.
Writing is not easy to do and knowing if something is going to relate with others before being published isn't easy either. Hopefully some of you can relate with the beginning parts and feel that the reader is always one of the main thoughts a writer should have on his mind. If not I would love to hear how I can improve. I believe I learned a lot from English 1110.01 but I know that there is still more to learn. 

8 comments:

  1. I really loved that you worked some humor into this project, ad this is mostly what kept me reading. Just as you mentioned in your post, you made things very relatable so it was easy for me to keep reading and feel as though you were actually speaking to me, not just that I was reading something you had posted. I also like that you threw in the comment about how beginning with such a bold statement about your distaste for English would get you a certain type of reader. I completely agree with this because I do not mind English, but it has also never been my favorite, so I wanted to hear what you had to say about it because we have similar views on it. Overall I was very entertained and engaged as your reader.

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  2. I really liked what you said about how research papers should never leave the reader guessing about anything, but that leaving them guessing is one of the main goals in creative writing. I never really thought about it like that, but it is completely true. If you leave big parts of your research paper out and leave it up to the imagination, the reader could fill in that blank with something completely opposite of what you are attempting to accomplish. In creative writing, if you leave absolutely nothing up to the imagination, I don't really see a point in writing anything at all. Plus you would end up with an obnoxiously long piece of literature that is mostly descriptive details, AKA boring!

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  3. Similar to you, I believe that keeping the reader in mind is one of the most important things, if not the most important. You need to keep the reader engaged and keep them guessing, especially in a research paper, as you mentioned above. It can be quite difficult to keep the reader’s attention in a research paper due to the large amount of information that is presented by the writer. It can also be challenging to stay engaged as reader because of the research paper’s length. I personally don’t enjoy reading long papers; therefore, the reader must do a good job of keeping my attention.

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  4. I think that there are many people that just like you and I, enjoy reading significantly more in our free time then we do for reading in class. I think that an important part of reading is being able to do whatever you want with the story. If you want to dig deep into the story, you can spend as much time as you want analyzing every line. If you'd rather read the story in a more laid back and relaxed mannor, youre free to do that as well. I dont think that you always have these freedoms when reading for class, and this is what makes it less enjoyable in my eyes.

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  5. I understand what you mean about you love to read but when you get to talking about the technical things in a novel is when it becomes less interesting. You don’t get to fully enjoy the story when the whole time you are searching for something. On the other hand, I agree that I did learn from doing that in this class such as always keeping your reader/ audience in mind when writing a paper. I never truly thought about who my targeted audience was when I wrote a paper but thanks to this class I am more aware now.

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  6. I thought this piece was written well and enjoyable to read, especially because the writer made sure to address what was necessary to cover in the assignment and the factual details they wished to bring to light but they also made sure to keep the reader in mind and add bits of humor to keep the reader’s attention. Many of the points they discussed are very relatable and could easily be something the reader feels they could agree with as many individuals enjoy reading but struggle with translating that to writing or have difficulties enjoying literature when they must view it in a different, more complex perspective that the perspective of reading for pure enjoyment.

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  7. I like what your main point on the topic because it is something I have always kept in mind while writing both my analytical research paper and creative story. You want to engage the audience in some way, whether it is having them think for themselves or giving them straight facts. Yes, different kinds of papers are meant for different kinds of audiences, but the overall goal is the same. You must be able to completely absorb your audience and make them believe that in some period of time they are living in your world. Anyone has that power over an audience.

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  8. I agree with you on the fact that English is not the greatest subject. I also agree with the fact that reading a book is fun, but analyzing it takes all the fun away. However, because of the research project I learned many things about the TV episode I had to work on, and it has actually made watching it a little bit better since I know some of the themes and such that are working behind the scenes. I also really liked how you engaged the reader multiple times, it made reading this blog a lot easier. This blog was very good.

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